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Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2002-01-14 02:35 PM

As I take my last breath
I watch my life flash before
My eye's And realize there were
Times i should have died.
But then you were there
To catch me when I fell
It was you who saved me from hell
And i owe all my thanks. My life
To you.
But then I'm still breathing so I guess
I'm not through.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2002-01-14 11:56 PM

Yes when we die we will be the first to know...James

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

2 posted 2002-01-15 09:25 AM

Jeremiah, sometimes even though the heart keeps beating doesn't mean the rhythm is
to the right beat.

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

3 posted 2002-01-15 01:37 PM

I liked the ending. Great job as usual my friend.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-01-15 03:35 PM

Great job, wonderfully written

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

5 posted 2002-01-20 10:50 PM

wonderfully dark write. my thoughts are with you in those dark moments.

Quod me nutrit me destruit.
("What nourishes me also destroys me." - latin)

*Satan'sFallenAngel*
New Member

since 2002-01-21

Posts 5

6 posted 2002-01-21 01:07 AM

I haven't been to passions in a long time, so long that I have forgotten my Username and password so I had to make a new one. But I am glad to see that not much has changed there are still wonderful works being written here every day. And this is one of the many. Great job my fellow poet!

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

7 posted 2002-01-22 03:10 PM

Nice write here my friend. I enjoyed it.

Titus

The Sun Always Rises.

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