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Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

0 posted 2001-12-16 08:28 PM

Dark freedom

I turn to walk away finally putting an end to all of it
I hear nothing, for I have shut out the world
Nothing, you say will stop me now go ahead have your little fit
I don’t really care what you tell me
Am I to believe that at this late date I really count
I am just a little something on the dish of life
They say life
Is what you make of it
Then I have wasted my life
Choosing to walk alone except with my new friends
I am choosing a new path away from the warmth of the light
Into the shadows of darkness of my earth-bound hell
Turning the once clear ice of my heart
Into BLACK ICE of a cold heart
Putting an end to this life that you have come to know
I would be doing you a favor for there is no room in this life for you
Or are you too blind to see
There is no word you can say to me
That out thunders your silence
Your silence gets louder
So I think I will go, setting you free
You would be free ~ I’ll be out of your way
After all it isn’t me that interests you
So I will go now, taking me out of your misery
Taking you out of my world

©alan
12/16/01

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2001-12-22 02:16 AM

Interesting...James

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-12-24 11:02 PM

Alan, this makes my heart feel so sad to read, I really really hope you are ok....
and hey,
I hope you have a great Christmas

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

3 posted 2001-12-25 01:07 AM

I loved it. Excellent visions you have provided us. Very sad but very well written

Mags

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

4 posted 2002-01-15 09:26 AM

This is probly the longest pout on record.It is however a insight of how we recoil from the things that cause us pain.

paladin

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

5 posted 2002-01-21 08:27 PM

very sad, but i enjoyed reading it.

Quod me nutrit me destruit.
("What nourishes me also destroys me." - latin)

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

6 posted 2002-01-22 03:14 PM

Very, very sad. A good read, though. I liked these lines:

So I will go now, taking me out of your misery
Taking you out of my world

And the bit about silence I loved. I hope you're doing better my friend. Good luck with thsi life. If I can do anything, let me know.

Sincerely,
Titus

The Sun Always Rises.

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