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Ophelia |
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Immortal Beloved Junior Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 42the carpathians |
Willow waters moving slow, Just be glad it’s all over. One last kiss to the faithful crow, With a bouquet of yellow clover. Ophelia,a blue mermaid out of water Born with fins,grown old with timidity. Puppet,the old man’s daughter Drenched in false humility. If you’re tired of what‘s grown old You turn within yourself. A madness five and ten-fold, A last quick effort for self. Do you now find precious identity At the bottom of a chill May stream? And do they value your virginity Lost,but not taken at the end of the dream? Reality is only that,a fragment of sleep. You’re tired of all this, I know; finding your answers in the water deep, you end with a single note of woe. Fere libenter homines id quod volunt credunt~Julius Caesar |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I found this quite deep, not simple at all. Sandra |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
this had a lot of inner meaning to it that i just couldnt grasp but either way it was an amazing piece...nice job.. ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Immortal Beloved Junior Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 42the carpathians |
Thanks guys,i do appreciate it  and yes there is alot of internal stuff in this one,not just the traditional ophelia story,but anyway thanks ammelida Fere libenter homines id quod volunt credunt~Julius Caesar |
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