Daughter of Evil (part of the Eve Nite saga)

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Dark Poetry #3

Daughter of Evil (part of the Eve Nite saga)

Dark Poet
Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 99
North Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-11-13 06:54 AM

Daughter of Evil
Copyright 2001
Written by James Edward Shields

Sultry that ruined
A maiden of white
Dress sunrise
A body now cold
Mark of the damned
Woven upon neck
Vixen in lust
Daughter of night replies

“Come now young one
You’ve sold your soul
You belong to me
Just give in and see
Wonders I will show you
Come and behold
You are my plaything
You’ll never grow old”

Daughter of night
Goddess there of
A queen in moonlight
Shadows dance
Like puppet demons
Of will
Around said prey
The maiden in white

“Come now child
You owe me that heart
I’m a daughter of evil
Rip your soul apart
Drink your life
Play your heartstrings
Make you dance
The pleasure you’ll bring”

Daughter of evil
Reap on the wind
Burn the soul
Daughter of evil
Bless thy prey
Laid asunder
For torture play
Rip so thy sin
Feverishly she’ll lust again
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Good cannot exist without evil. Darkness I embrace.

Immortal Beloved
Junior Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 42
the carpathians

1 posted 2001-11-13 02:15 PM

yowzers!! :!
Magnificent work,i am intrigued by your use of words,it's very unique and i love the weird flow and the subject,trés bein!!

ammelid

Fere libenter homines id quod volunt credunt~Julius Caesar

JT
Member

since 2001-09-28

Posts 69
Arkansas, USA

2 posted 2001-11-13 10:59 PM

I remember when Ronnie James Dio could write this well. I like it. Has a real gothic feel to it. Good job.

JT

Dark Poet
Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 99
North Carolina, USA

3 posted 2001-11-14 04:48 AM

I didn't quite expect such praise but I won't turn it away either. This is the only installment of the saga I've written this year. All others date back a few years.

Thanks for the unexpected and much welcomed comments.

James

Good cannot exist without evil. Darkness I embrace.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

4 posted 2001-11-14 01:26 PM

this is a great poem so i had to bump it up top. i love the feel i get here mostly because this is the kind of stuff i love.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

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