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Dark Poetry #3

The face in the mirror

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

0 posted 2002-12-22 04:07 PM

The face
The face right here that is sad
The face that wants happiness so bad
Stop looking in the mirror
Just turn away
Turn the other way
Now look back
What this? Evil upon the face in the mirror...
Is that really your face?
A disguise you keep putting on your face
Now evil has been traced
Dark and gloom took over you
Now what should you do
Mirror Mirror on the wall why did my happiness fall?
Evil casted its evil spell
Now I am stuck in this Evil shell,
To live forever in my own hell

[This message has been edited by LadyPeach1 (12-22-2002 04:10 PM).]

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

1 posted 2002-12-23 12:04 PM

hey ladypeach,that was a nice poem with a twist of "evil" i dont know the word to use to describe what i mean.its quite sad also i know exactly how u feel in that poem but i wanna tell u rite now not to get drowned in the dark.this is christmas..for light!!!so please i beg u in Jesus name if u believe in that name to get out of your own "hell" as u put it.

merry christmas.

LADY_DEATH
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 105
Fl

2 posted 2002-12-23 05:16 PM

I liked your poem, it made me think about how things aren't always easy for some people.To look in the mirror and actually face your weaknesses takes alot more strength than most people think.

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