Dark Poetry #3 |
Emptiness |
TeChNo KiTtY Junior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 22Wisconsin, USA |
Emptiness burns within me, Searing my insides, Leaving behind blackened heartache...and charred remains of trust. Memories of misused love scatter the feathery ashes. Hollowness comsumes me, blinding me with darkness. Tiny flames of what might have been gently flickering, licking at tender thoughts.. Threatening an inferno of scorching pain. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
First off...WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! Your first post was wonderful...it was full of emotion and thats great!! i cant wait to see more from you..keep em comin! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes...James |
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TeChNo KiTtY Junior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 22Wisconsin, USA |
thanks to the both of you "i tried so hard, and got so far..but in the end, it doesn't even matter.." |
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allis4angel Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 82Portugal |
I like this one. Sad, but beautiful. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is great! Done with such feeling. Welcome to Passions! ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Hey Welcome to DP Hope you'll stay & make this your 2nd home like I have-- LOVE ELMO |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
welcome to passions...this is a great start.. alan |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hello, and welcome. . . this indeed showed a depth of those feelings. . . well done. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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