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Dark Poetry #3

Release Me

Jonas
Senior Member

since 2000-03-03

Posts 796
Oregon

0 posted 2001-09-11 05:56 PM

I pray for the answers
that seem so elusive;
and end to the pain
that controls me,
release from the burden
of a heart betrayed,
rescue from the emptiness
that swallows all;
a bottomless pit
into which I fall
continuously -
the void of her absence.

9/11/2001

baerlon
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA

1 posted 2001-09-11 11:34 PM

This peom has strong emotions that i and several people here relate to. Thank you for sharing it with us.

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

Jonas
Senior Member

since 2000-03-03

Posts 796
Oregon

2 posted 2001-09-12 05:49 PM

Thank you for your kind words. But in light of yesterday's tragedies, my problems now seem insignificant.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

3 posted 2001-09-16 10:01 PM

Jonas....I know these feelings well...but I alsp know what you mean when you say our problem is small compared to some..good luck friend

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

4 posted 2001-09-23 09:22 PM

Heartfelt words here. Strong emotions. Well put together.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Jonas
Senior Member

since 2000-03-03

Posts 796
Oregon

5 posted 2001-09-23 09:54 PM

Thank you everyone for the kind words.

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