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Why is Life so Cruel
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Why is Life so Cruel |
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Heart=Life Junior Member
since 2001-02-03
Posts 29United Kingdom |
I can't explain My feelings this year Most things have changed For the worst,I fear. I've felt empty inside And all alone I've dealt with my problems All on my own. I can't find my smile Since it all ended It was going really well My heart, just never mended. Why do girls do this to me They end it just like that They say i'm too much of a friend Yet treat me like a door mat. I think things are going well Then it changes into heartbreak I wish life would treat me better Just better, for my own sake. Lately i've been moody And treating people like loose change I keep chasing after love But it flys out of range. What's next of my life It'll be another wrong turn To take in my strife And then never learn. How do I Change these mistakes That I never seem to spot Because it happens everytime And it forever hurts alot. I hope someone can answer All my unanswered questions It might make me smile more Help me learn from my lessons. ------------------------------------------------ surprising how things change isn't it!!! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Heart, a very emotional poem with quite alot of power behind it. Well done. Keep your head up though ok. Life isn't going to be horrible forever. I hope your situation improves and remember to smile once in a while. Girls that treat you like dirt aren't worth the time of day. Remember the ones that do like you for being a human being and not a door mat. Good luck.  ~AF~ "To alcohol! The cause of - and solution to - all of life's problems!" Homer Simpson |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
keep your head up my friend well, maybe you're looking too hard just relax and let it come to you and when it does, you'll know it  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Women.....PUH!........PUH TO WOMEN!!!! Anyway, nice poem. I relate to it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Heart=Life Junior Member
since 2001-02-03
Posts 29United Kingdom |
Cheers For your support guys & Gals, means alot XX |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like how you expressed this, good job on the poem! "Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" "Life's short. If you don't look around once in a while you might miss it." BothUnknown |
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grey::tears Junior Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 19lost within my mind |
this was a very powerful poem. stay strong though, and keep putting things out through your heart. A.K.S. "Never fear something, just because you don't understand." |
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