Teen Poetry #4 |
A Special Kind of Guy |
Wheelsgirl Junior Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 21MA, USA |
A Speial Kind of Guy How do you know when that specail someone really cares about you? Is it when they say I love you? Or is it when they make you smile. How about when they say that they’ll do anything for you like, cross an ocean, climb a mountain, or just look into your eyes and make you cry tears of joy. They hug you and squeeze you untill they can’t squeeze you anymore. They help you become painless, to talk to you and to listen to your problems and to help you through them. And when the mood is just right they cradle your face in their hands and give you a kiss that feels so good and so meaningful that there are no words to describe it. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very well written wheels glad to see you've decided to post in here again Put it this way, you'll know a guy really cares for you when the little things you do makes him happy to be with you. "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Acire knows ALL about those little things....he's got one in his pants haha jk anyway.....I liked this. I think you got the idea of when you know when a guy would truly feel as if he would do anything for you and the like. Anyway I think it's the little things, like acire pointed out, that count the most....... I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Oh this is wonderful! It's going into my library! I'm in usch a good mood now! "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great poem, I can think of my someone special for this one... it's going straight in the libary. |
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