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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia 
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IT IS SPECIAL No matter where we are Or whatever we may be doing Every time I spend with you It is special Even if we are just Driving in the car And my hand is resting on your lap It is special When we are sitting in the café Sipping our hot drinks Just gazing at each other It is special Walking along the beach at sunset Hand in hand Talking and laughing It is special Playing car games at timezone And riding those crazy horses Having loads of fun It is special And when we are together Our 2 bodies unite as one No feeling is greater It is special Resting with one another Lying in your arms Content and happy It is special * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
nice poem. first time i see you post, the poem was calm and soothing, kinda special when you consider most of the other ones. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This was very sweet! I think the two of you are very happy, it definitly shows.  We need more love in this world!! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Very nice poem. It's good to see people happy together "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Quit it, your making me jealous. But great job at doing it! ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very sweet poem. I liked it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
No doubt about it, you have something "special." Well done. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Very good job of writing this, it really gets your message out well. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
it's nice to see you happy with your relationship right now i saw you go thru the other one i guess the other one ended for a good reason and that's for you to find this and be happy thanks for the read and keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
Hey pplz, thanks for the replys! Acire - i'm pretty sure this would have to be the same guy! i've been with him for over 6months now and things are going really really gr8! thanks again! Luv Jo xoxo * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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