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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia 
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I love it how you hug me and hold me so tight I love it when I’m in your arms everything feels so right I love it how you try so hard to make sure I’m always smiling I love it when you look into my eyes and tell me that you love me I love it how you make the world a better place for me I love it when you be the best person you could ever be I love it how you always are the one to stop a fight I love it when you hate it when I’m out of sight I love it how you call me all those cute nicknames I love it when you like to play all them silly games I love it how you make an effort to see me everyday I love it when you know what’s coming even before I say I love it how you look so cute when you think that I’m upset I love it when you talk about our future life and our future pet But most of all what I love the most… Is how you always manage to make me feel like the most important person ever & how you care about me and love me so much, like no other * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
sounds like your special to someone... nice repetition.. keep it up. ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
That person must be very special to you, it's always nice to be able to tell the people special in our lives how we feel. Nice peom, very sweet. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
This is wonderful!!  I really really like it. I love it hehehe no pun intendedi always like your work. This one deserves an A+ ~*Valerie*~ *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I loved it too.....very nice and sweet.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Not only sweet, but sweet plus. This poem is really good And have you given this one to him???< !signature-->"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 01-19-2001).] |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
Hey, thanks for taking the time to reply to this one! hehe it is a bit sweet ey! and i sent it to him on email but he doesn't get the chance to check it very often so who knows when he'll get it! anyways catchya! Luv JO xoxo * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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