Teen Poetry #4 |
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June 23rd |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Summer's just begun Life had just begun for me We'll see what it holds I haven't posted in here before, but I wanted to do a birthday senryu after reading all of yours. Thanks for the challenge, Allan! (but I won't say how old I am! ![]() |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
nobody will ask you your age Elizabeth. dont worry bout it. but if you want to tell us, we wont object nor divulge this information in other boards, yet we reserve the right to link back to the post that has it. ![]() San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
lol @ San ![]() Great job on this Elizabeth. I enjoyed it. "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Dopey Dope![]()
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very nice. so you're 19 eh? ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood![]() ![]()
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ask a lady her age? I wouldn't dream of it. You should all be ashamed. As for the challenge, the CHALLENGE was really Jeremy's idea. I just went with it. Nicely done, Liz. Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Hi Elizabeth ... great to see you here! Challenge well met my friend, nicely done (now about that age thing, lol)! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
LOL, couldn't help but laugh at San's reply! Actually I was joking when I said I wouldn't say how old I was. Dopey was fairly close, I am 18 and will be 19 this summer. Thanks for all the replies, everyone, you made me feel so welcome. ![]() |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
nice job concealing the info.. i liked this one a lot too! ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great job on the poem, I like it ![]() "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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