Teen Poetry #4 |
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December 13, 1982 821213 |
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Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV ![]() |
December thirteenth, Such a happy little girl Who knew grampa’d die? My grampa dies when I was 2 days old ![]() www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow. That must have been a confusing time for your family, you know, happy for you; yet sad for the loss. Uck. But this was very good, nice job. ![]() xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
(mouth dropped) I am so sorry that happened 2 days after your birth that is quite sad as well as odd. And I am sorry you never got to know your grandfather |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
Oh I'm so sorry that happened, my father died when I was lik 5 months old so I sorta know what thats like. As for the poem it was a sad but good piece. >¶Øʆ< |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great one here but very sad....... ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Yup my grampa died when I was 2 days old...they tell me he waited to see me before he went...and if anyone has ever heard the song "Holes in the Floor of Heaven", every important event of my life, it rains or snows. ![]() www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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Allan Riverwood![]() ![]()
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nicely done, Tamma. Welcome back to the forums. |
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Acies![]()
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
you know Tamma...i was just gonna tell you the same thing...He did wait for you and that should make you feel very special I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
How sad....but I am sure he is watching over you! And it's sweet to think he held on just a little bit longer so he could see you. Well done! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
the birthday challenge really brought out some odd momments.. sorry to heart about this one.. ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yeah, that must have been confusing for your family. good job on the senryu. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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