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Morouxshi San
Member

since 2000-10-11

Posts 207
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2001-01-13 01:26 AM

not part of the "hardest break-up" sessions...

-=Ever=-

come to me all.
all who shall be.
for those who deny
have never been.

all fall in love.
once and for all.
for it comes one time
and stays for eternity.

unwritten they are
the laws of change.
but love, oh love.
nothing more beautiful and strange.

heart, poor heart.
bound to one love.
only one,
once and for all.
-San

San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

Melster
Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

1 posted 2001-01-13 01:30 AM

That is beautiful... we are all here to help, as you know!!

Keep up the great work!!

Melz!!

You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already...

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-01-13 01:39 AM

For lack of some decent comment, allow me to say that I am impressed.
Keep it up, San.

Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy.

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

3 posted 2001-01-13 11:51 AM

your making a strong comeback
good job San

~JDR

"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

Poet on Acid
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

4 posted 2001-01-13 12:52 PM

great work man. A nice view of love, a view I don't share but a nice view and you put it into words quite well.

>¶ØÊ†<

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-01-13 01:22 PM

Felipe......great poem. Honest view on love and I truly enjoyed this poem.

Oh.....the battle commences...good luck.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Morouxshi San
Member

since 2000-10-11

Posts 207
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-01-13 01:50 PM

thanx fer the replies...

this poem was just sitting in my pc so i had to post it while i got the new ones again.

glad you liked it.

San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

7 posted 2001-01-13 07:59 PM

Mmmm...good, good....You better stay cool....
~Carly

inspiration of my art search for light out of the dark all the pictures in my heart lie awake there in my fog...

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

8 posted 2001-01-16 04:03 PM

I like this one, I've read it a couple times and like it more each time. nice job

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

peanogrl83
Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 202

9 posted 2001-01-16 05:19 PM

Spifiliciously delicious.

Vreni

peanogrl83
Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 202

10 posted 2001-01-16 05:52 PM

Spifiliciously delicious.

Vreni

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