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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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Talking to you on Friday, was the best thing I could do. There was something I needed to say, something I had to tell you. I'm moving away in a while, in maybe two months, or three. I want to know if this will affect, anything between you and me. You told me you got my emails, and I wonder why you never wrote. But you've cancled your account now, and so I guess I'll never know. Talking to you on Friday, was like old times come back. And I found some kind of courage, that I guess I might have lacked. this is just me being weird. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hmm... forgive me for saying that the poem didn't really seem to end for me. The flow was good, but I think the ending was left off. Maybe add a couple of lines to bring it all together? Other than that, it was nicely done. Good job, Allysa. ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I loved this.....great write. Oh and allysa, yer such a sweetie. Thanks for the e-card!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hey Allysa...takes guts to do what you did that is the right thng to do though or else you'll never know talk to him again and make him answer these questions you have what's there to lose "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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