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to kiss you
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to kiss you |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
to kiss you is like letting pure, liquid light flood into me to feel your breath on my skin is like feeling love, warm and soft and calm to touch you is like touching a live wire feeling every hair stand on end to hold you is like letting all my worries and fears drift away, leaving just me and you to look into your eyes is like looking at the stars at night and woundering who could make something so beautiful to love you there are no words that describe it ~to my girlfriend, she might read it tonite... wounder what shell say... CLB let the fighting words lie let the candle light die let the sun come up let the same imply ~EvE 6 |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
She'll be speechless. Marvelous poem. I liked it a great deal. ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Omg!  You are so sweet!!!!  Thanks, I needed that. Very nice poem, btw. I love you,Bel |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Btw, Yes, Allan, she is speechless |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Haha... nice try, but you already said something.  Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
aww this was sooo sweet~  geood luck with u and ure grl*dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Awwwwwwwwwww hold on AWWWWWWWWWWWWWwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww haha ok. Nicely done here!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
I am going to ditto dopeys AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWwwwwwwwwwwwwwwWWWWWW This is one of the sweetest poems I have ever read. Great job on this. Into the library. The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
There's nothing really new to say! lol, I absolutely love it, well expressed feeling! "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Isabel is a lucky girl...that's all I have to say "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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