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jytree
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since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
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0 posted 2001-03-04 10:15 PM

Blood read moon,
Blacken sky,
Animals grawling and howling,
Telling me its time,

Look up in the sky,
Feeling my body change guy to wolf,
Pain expressed is out of sight,
And when I awake in the morring I remember nothing of the night,

Starting sproting hair unlike before,
I Feel my figure transform under the blood red moon,
Know to myself the time will be soon,

Letting out a deadly howl,
Running through the forest I start to grawl,
Finding a vilage but don't know how,

Sneaking in just for the fun,
I stumble a holy woman,
I look at her she look at me I was trying to think of which one was scarry me or the nun,

So I kiss her with my monster hairy lips,
Watching her run and trip,
Running back into the woods,
I am hunted down by men with hoods,

Snack time!mmmgood:

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel

jytree
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since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

1 posted 2001-03-04 10:17 PM

I hope no one get ticked by the ending I just was trying to think of something funny

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-03-04 10:18 PM

This was quite the fun read here jytree. I liked it.....it caught my attention and reeled me in for the whole duration of the poem. Nicely done here!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-03-04 10:23 PM

Haha... this was good.
The ending made me laugh out loud. Very well done.
~Allan

Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan

Greeneyes617
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since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

4 posted 2001-03-04 11:16 PM

Well....ok...THAT was different...Good job.

jytree
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since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

5 posted 2001-03-04 11:58 PM

hey I am glad you like it I am just writting stuff and it come out cool

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-03-05 07:49 PM

awesome narration there jytree
im very impressed

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

jytree
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since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

7 posted 2001-03-05 09:34 PM

thanks

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel

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