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The Men" (Song...I think,,,)
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The Men" (Song...I think,,,) |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
"The Men" Words of love and life Mean nothing to the soulless man Thoughts of a bloody knife Never curse the solace man They live in Two different worlds They're livin Two different lives Thoughts of joy and pleasures Are nothing to the soulless man Words of evil and dark treasures Mean nothing to the solace man The weakness of the soulless man Unfeeling and uncaring Inside his dark heart he ran A heart dark and not sharing The blindness of the solace man Not seeing the evils around him He can't see the wicked inhabiting the land A pointless courage that will never go dim "Nothing is wrong" Means nothing to the soulless man The point of this song Is lost on the solace man Not my best...whoa I'm getting to used to saying that...anyways this is my half baked attempt at a song. Enjoy. >¶Øʆ< |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I did enjoy. Had a nice feel to it. Not bad at all, Tony. ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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DreadedLiver Member
since 2001-01-23
Posts 56Alter, Ego |
haha half-baked attempt... omg rofl. I liked the song a lot dude..lighten up or smoke up, haha. Really good one! JR "The *bump for jeremydraul's work, hahaha!!" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this was a nice song. I could envision this song to be very good with a few additions and a lot of MUSIC added to it........nicely done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
good song...Your talent shows in every piece you write. I do believe that this is not a bad one  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
This is amazing.. you never stop amazing me with your works! Another one very nicely done... *Jennifer "My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see." |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Very cool. I enjoyed this one, with a few touchups it could be an awesome song. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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orange()alligator Junior Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 21 |
go tony! very pretty song -bergundy- |
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