Teen Poetry #4 |
A guy and a girl |
Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
One there was a guy in an orange shirt Once there was a girl in her new khaki skirt The two talked and after a while They fell in love with each others smile And then there was a casual dance They wanted to be together at first glance So dance is what they did Being together is what they bid Then these two went out one night And now saw each other in a different light Now they guy and the girl are together And thats how it'll be now, and forever |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
This poem made me say AWWWWWWWWWWWW. Great piece!!! It made me jump for joy at the ending Into the library you must go. Love ~ Amanda Destiny~ The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
It's so simple, and that's what makes it so wonderful! nothing elaborate, back to basics! I love it "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sweet poem.........it's a nice story. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This is such a sweet poem. I love the story behind it. Very positive. And I think you put it together very well. This is going into my library. It would do me good to look back on this in a few months or so again. Great job, Angelbee. ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I love the way you narrated you poem what a beautiful story and ending loving it thanks for sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. [This message has been edited by acire (edited 03-04-2001).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was such a cute lil story/poem!!! Aww i liked it a lot!! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
how romantic, what a superb poem!!! JR When my life dims to a perish, it will become a quote in itself... |
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