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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa 
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There will be times you'll feel lost, will want to give up no matter the cost. You'll find there's times that will confuse, making you feel you can only loose. But through troubled times there's one way out, a way past the hate and all of the doubt: Dare to see what others fear, look past the problems you keep so near, dare to be what others won't, don't give in to their do's and don'ts. Most of all... dare to be the best you can be. Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice! |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This was full of great advice. A good message. The flow was also excellent in here.  Another masterpiece. I'm sure a lot of people could get something out of reading this. See you around. ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought the message was great. What a wonderful read!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
yes yes..the message was awesome. great poem  *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Whoa! This was great! It sounds a lot like some of my earlier existential poetry. It sorta put things into perspective for me. "Rise above the crowd and fight!" Beautiful. Thankyou for sharing. This poem really helped me out a lot! "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" -- Magus |
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Raven Skye Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 112.In a House. |
Hehe I have to admit when I first started reading this the tone of Christina Agularia's song "I turn to you" was in the background but it made it seem even better to read. So I suggest that everyone go out and buy that CD and then read this again while playing that song. It meant alot. Made me smile, which is hard to do. Keep up the good work!! *×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×* There's nothing I want more to take than the only thing that they won't let me take... my life. ~Bel |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Wow this is one of those poems that I was meant to read today!! I've been so doubtful all day long!! Great message, loved it I really don't know what else to say but thanks for writing this poem I know that sounds weird but I'm weird =pTmd, Kristen "Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night" ~Crash and Burn~ |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
That was great!! Really, wow..I'm impressed....  Bel |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
wonderful....Such a beautiful message we need more of these poems in here  thanks for sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Thanks all of you guys... Thanks a million Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
hmmm ive been lazy lately... glad i found this because it really gives some good advice: "But through troubled times there's one way out, a way past the hate and all of the doubt" JR When my life dims to a perish, it will become a quote in itself... |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
This is good advice.. Dont get twisted in problems that, when compared to loving eachother, hold little relevence.. and pay attention to the inner motives of everyones actions and see past the plastic ramparts we all hide behind.. beautiful |
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