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Teen Poetry #4

Picture in my poket

jytree
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since 2000-01-26

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0 posted 2001-03-02 11:08 AM

moved to the moderators forum for review.

shortilove_03
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since 2001-02-15

Posts 20
Arkansas, United States

1 posted 2001-03-02 12:13 PM

Wow,
I really liked this poem. This is how you feel about breaking up. HOpe you feel better.

Shelia

jytree
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since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
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2 posted 2001-03-02 09:10 PM

I write like my friend at time everything is ok but sometimes this happens

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel

QtPi239EK
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since 2001-02-22

Posts 3
pa, usa

3 posted 2001-03-02 10:09 PM

aww this was really great!!!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-03-03 12:52 PM

I liked this a lot. nicely done here jytree

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Greeneyes617
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since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

5 posted 2001-03-03 01:06 AM

Hey Jay!!! You did a pretty good job of expressing your problem. I liked it. You know YOU can call me ANY time. Thats what friends are for.

jytree
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since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
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6 posted 2001-03-03 07:42 PM

thanks dopey I was getting stuck with writter's block and I just let my stress out in a poem and greeneyes I will call you if I can works is getting busyer

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel

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