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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2001-02-28 08:46 PM

Lurking Emptiness:

The kisses no longer mine.
Lurking mist from below.
Whispering shadows of time.
This feeling I bestow.

Fickle love of fantasy.
A slow death that is true.
Cliff of calm tranquility.
The void I never knew.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Ina
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

1 posted 2001-02-28 08:50 PM

nice and short. A little sad though. great work.
REgina

Master
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since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

2 posted 2001-02-28 11:08 PM

I really this, I think this is one of your best... short and to the point... thanks

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-02-28 11:35 PM

I have one thing to say...I hope to see you write about happiness with a girl soon

You, as everyone else does, deserve to be happy

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

4 posted 2001-03-01 12:19 PM

yah dopes, get a new chick man, you need it. such a sad tone in this poem...nice job with the description!

JR

When life dims to a perish, my life will become a quote in itself...

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

5 posted 2001-03-01 02:20 AM

Great poem it got straight to the point...Hope the right person come along soon..you deserve it..
~Nikki~

Child of the Stars

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since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

6 posted 2001-03-01 03:56 PM

Yo Javi. Carly really really liked this one. Make that 3 really's. No, 6 billion. INFINITE REALLY's!! Ok sure. So yeah. Nice. Very nice.
~Carly

"Nature is not only all that is visible to the eye--it also includes the inner pictures of the soul." ~Edvard Munch

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

7 posted 2001-03-01 04:43 PM

Yeah, it's a really good one Dopey. The feeling of it shows well, keep sharing them man.

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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2001-03-03 12:24 PM

Thanks all!
MUA!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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