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Tears of Blood
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Tears of Blood |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
Tears of blood Forming a rampant dangerous flood Bloody dreams Full of horror pain and fearful screams Dreams of pain Robing the mind of hope and driving it insane Under pains spell Falling down into ones own personal hell Too full of hate Can't get rid of the hate, it's far too late Not my best, but oh well. >¶Øʆ< |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Not your best, but extremely strong. Can't ask for more outta a poem. Good job.  "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i agree, it definitely is very strong. Short, direct to the point, and very powerful. keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
nothing wrong with it.. very prominent in its words...great description JR When life dims to a perish, my life will become a quote in itself... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here.......powerful words.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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