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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Words... Said hours ago Still felt on my heart Words... So heartless I stand in tears Words... So uncaring It tears me apart I can't take it anymore I won't listen to your Heartless, uncaring Words... Feb. 13, 2001 ~*~SCG~*~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
nice to see you again SCG what's going on? update us, will ya? So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
I will never get over you writting sad poem I mean they are good but it is not you but it is my oppion, Dear hottiet write from within your heart, For in turn we shall nver be apart, Close you eyes fall alsleep, when you open them again we shall meet. Lead me not into temptation, I can find the way there mysel |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Wow, power while reserving frailty and pain. I love it. you do good work; real talent. "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Is everything ok with you? Hope so..... lots of pain in this one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Oh this one hurt me to read it. I'm going to ditto what dopey said. And I hope everything turns out for the best. The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Everything is fine, ya'll...need for concern. I am fine..I have no idea how many times I have to tell ya'll...I ONLY WRITE WHAT COMES TO ME!!! It's not because I feel this way, but I know other people do! I guess I'm just voicing wrds others are afraid to speak out loud!  But thanks for caring anyway! ~*~SCG~*~ |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
aw..forget it. I was going to write something, but I just forgot. ~*~SCG~*~ |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
hehe nice bump there...  I liked this one a lot...good description on how those words can hurt peopleJR When life dims to a perish, my life will become a quote in itself... |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
The truth hurts sometime, but it takes a bigger person to listen to them great piece |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Thanks Jeremy...for noticing my *bump* :O Thanks for replying TRUEluv..I'm glad you liked it! ~*~SCG~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
So I'm a little late, give me a break Good job on this, the repition of "words" worked well!Please visit my webpage: http://lakewalker.homestead.com/index.html |
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