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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
You make me laugh You make me cry, But the crying only happens When you're not with me at night. Your voice so sweet Your touch is so gentle, I just melt in your arms And get all-sentimental. I want to be with you For as long as I can, Because without you near Is something I can't stand. I want to scream to the world That I think I'm in love with you, That I have found the love of my life And that is the absolute truth. < !signature--> *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed [This message has been edited by ~sugarpie313~ (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Hold on to him and don't let him go... I hope that your happiness lasts forever and that things never change for you!! Great poem... Melz!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
looks like you joined passions during the same time frame that i did, but i dont think ive ever read a poem by you. this was very good, very very good. i absolutely loved it. very well written and just straight to the point with some magical twists...  San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This is sweet. Love is rare, if you feel you have it, hold on tight. Forget all the people who tell you it's puppy love, cause even if it is, oh well, you two have each other now, so be happy!! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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GirlsBestFriend Member
since 2000-12-27
Posts 71Planet Earth |
So perfect! u know I love your poetry so much, but this is lovely. see: "I want to scream to the world That I think I'm in love with you,". made me think like ' oh God, please send me someone like that, please!!!' I mean so true and positive. all the good luck. ~lotsa luv "Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world" |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
good job... if you screamed loud enuf I might hear you ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was nice.......very sweet poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
"Your voice so sweet Your touch is so gentle, I just melt in your arms And get all-sentimental." I love your rhyme up there and that whole stanza. This poem is really good "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
awwww, that was so sweet and beautiful. It's good to read some uplifting poems. Your a great writer, keep it up. >¶Øʆ< |
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