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You're...A Mystery to Me
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You're...A Mystery to Me |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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Sometymes, I wish I could dig into your thoughts, Just so I could know what you think when you see me. I wish you would tell me what’s on your mind, Instead of hiding everything from me. Sometymes if feels like you’re a mystery, And that I must unreel you from your secrets. You popped into my life so suddenly, And have been a part of it ever since. Now, my parents weren’t too happy, When they heard about you. They thought you were the reason, Behind the breakup of Irvin and me. I never spoke of you before the 13th, Just another day of mystery. Mystery surrounds you, And has since the first tyme we spoke. www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 02-24-2001).] |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Tamma, this was great. There was a story and u shrouded it in mystery....great work. Regina |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I liked the poem. Why did you create the alternate spelling on "Time?" That wasn't clear on me, but was obvious. Good job, kiddo. -Allan The unintelligent are merely tools for the intelligent. That would make my house a veritable toolshed. ~~Allan Riverwood |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here tamma.....This poem was about me everybody. I'm a mystery to everybody. Oooooo Aaaaaa  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
Beeeeee~utyful!!! I luv it!!  Sometymes, I wish I could dig into your thoughts,Just so I could know what you think when you see me. sounds very familar lol!! Great job on this one, keep writing! Much Luv, ~*~Sweetstuff~*~ How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is really good, I like how the tone is written into it. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.therainforestsite.com |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Prolly ur 2nd best ive ever read, behind the butterfly poem...this was greatly expressed, thanks for sharing! JR When life dims to a perish, my life will become a quote in itself... |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
well done again Tamma. You seem to have been improving. That I can see. Keep it up and don't stop sharing So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
great job tamma  and i just wanted to say that i LOVE your quote..ive wanted to say that forever. i love that movie..aww gives me goosbumps lol but neways, keep it up!!*dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Ricky Junior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 28West Virginia, USA |
Who's Irvin.Really though. I liked it, as I like most of your stuff that's not about me in bad ways. |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
library addition... |
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