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A Waterfall |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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Heh . . . Here I go again…beatin’ my head into a wall, trying to force a poem  ~*~ A waterfall ~*~ Down the hill, theres a trail, That leads to a secret hidden treasure. Sparkling blue water flows, Over rocks, and turning white. Near the bottom, it starts to foam, This waterfall is a beautifull sight. A santuary, almost, So hidden from the outside. But, the trail continues, One side leads to a pond. The other leads to a cliff, Over looking the pond. The waterfall and pond, Hold many memoires. From the lil talks I had with “him”, To the tyme I fell and split my pants (not funny, Dopey, I know you’re laughing). I’m sure gonna miss it, But I’ll never for get the memories it holds. Hehe...its not about, love, rednecks or Justin...I’m doin’ good www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 02-24-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Yes, you are. The reference to Dopey was cute. This poem had a playful attitude about it. I needed a smile just now, and you did me this favour. Thank you. Well done. -Allan The unintelligent are merely tools for the intelligent. That would make my house a veritable toolshed. ~~Allan Riverwood |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hiya there. Me liked this berry much!!! I needed a smile, too. Don't hit yer head TOO hard, kay? Stay cool.~Carly "Nature is not only all that is visible to the eye--it also includes the inner pictures of the soul." ~Edvard Munch |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
It's funny cuz I started laughing, then read on and stopped as if you were my mommy scolding me......which by the way she never does because I'm the perfect lil boy. Wonderful poem tamma, considering my name was mentioned, I like it even more haha.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm sorry but I'm laughing right now Tamma I do like the poem, though in the end the poem kinda wondered away..... keep sharing So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
that was a great poem! it was very funny at the end. great work. Regina |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Haha, I needed a smile! Thanks a lot..that was funny. What a memorable place you describe! Nice imagery JR When life dims to a perish, my life will become a quote in itself... |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
library addition... |
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