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Betrayal |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
You said you would always be here I believed you Lie after Lie Hit after Hit You seemed different when I met you now you seem distant I found out you were cheating Lie after Lie Hit after Hit Finally I left Thought I was free You found me Told me you changed Lie after Lie Hit after Hit I stood by your side You turned on me Lie after Lie Hit after Hit Sorry I haven't been around, I have been very busy, and didn't have anything to write. So tell me what you think. Your friend, Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Never say 'I Love You' unless you mean it" [This message has been edited by Chel (edited 02-24-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This was a great poem. "Lie after lie, hit after hit." That really did something for me when I read it... Great job.  -Allan The unintelligent are merely tools for the intelligent. That would make my house a veritable toolshed. ~~Allan Riverwood |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was well written. It sucks that you had to write the poem though due to the situation that occurred. A wonderful read though!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I am glad that you enjoyed reading it. I hope that you read more of my work someday soon. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Never say 'I Love You' unless you mean it" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
it's good to see you back Chel nice to see you sharing your poems again You've narrated your feelings real well on this one hope things get better for you keep sharing So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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