Teen Poetry #4 |
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My apology |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
I apologize please except it I see how I've been acting Believe me nothing has changed I still see your beauty before I go to rest I still see your smile in my dreams I still feel your kiss when I awake as if I am feeling your deepest passion when you dream For you see my state of mind is filled with curiosity I always wonder how much you care I awlays wonder if you see us together |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
oooh... so meaningful and full of wisdom... Hope everythings cool, just keep on draining out these beautiful pieces JR When life dims to a perish, my life will become a quote in itself... |
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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
i liked to poem i really did thatnks for the post i write poems all the time and i post them for all of you. some times i write 4or 5 a day and then sometimes just one and i post the one that i like |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Beautiful poem. Very meaningful,keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Never say 'I Love You' unless you mean it" |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
beautiful and sad ![]() keep your head up So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A wonderful read! I thought this was quite sad.....get well....and I hope your other does too. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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DancinQueen![]()
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
aww this was really cute. im with everyone else..quite sad. but beautiful ![]() *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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