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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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It hurts to much to see you. It hurts to much to care. It hurts to much that you were the first, the one who was always there. It hurts to much to love you. It hurts to be on my own. It hurts to be without the love, that you have always shown. It hurts to see them smiling. It hurts to say goodbye. It hurts me when the tears sting, every single time I cry. It hurts to be the one and only. It hurts to try to see. It hurts to love and loose, when you only want to be. It hurts when you can't see it. It hurts when it's suddenly gone. It hurts when the shadows come, staying with you all night long. It hurts to be lonely. It hurts to even try. It hurts to much to loose you, when this will never die. It hurts to much to want you. It hurts to much to say. It hurts to much to whisper, 'I love you' every day. It hurts to much to stay here. It hurts to much to leave. It hurts to much to hate you, when you lie and decieve. It hurts to much to touch you. It hurts to much to cry. It hurts to much to be me, I sometimes want to die. It hurts to much to live like this. It hurts to much to go on. It hurts to much to think like this, thoughts creeping all day long. It hurts to much to miss you. It hurts to much to let go. It hurts to much to love you, and to not let you know. It hurts to much to be here. It hurts to much to fight. It hurts to much to be wrong, and never ever right. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Just ignore the general message. Wrote this yesterday when I was really mad. All better now. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
oh Allysa  be strong hun ~*hugs*~ So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
I'm ignoring the general message but I really do hope that everything is better. Smile Allysa, frowning takes too much out of you.  ~AF~ "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks much ya all! Muchas gracias. Okay, no need to confuse myself. C-ya all around. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Allysa, Awesome poem! I know how it is when you write these types of poems. That is why I haven't posted here in awhile, because my anger in my writing comes out in a little more vulgar way, if you know what I mean. I'm glad to hear you're doing better now. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
((((hugs)))) |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
i thought this was a good poem. i liked it. the pain goes away- take it from someone who knows what its like. hehe, i seem to write better poems about the pain of a breakup than other stuff. :o) keep writing. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Awwwww hey allysa.....this poem was so sad.....I'm sorry. Very nicely written though. but still.....*hugs*  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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