I do not had a need for tenses...

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Teen Poetry #4

I do not had a need for tenses...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2001-02-21 09:26 PM

I do not had a need for tenses
Each verse I’ll written is sincere
I and my readers reached consensus,--
The words I wrote seems always clear

The written poems all had saying
“I’ll loved just you forever dear”
Responded, all the girls will swaying,--
I’d be romantic, -- it appeared.

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

1 posted 2001-02-22 01:38 AM

that was very very impressive.. what a brillian idea, much better than the punctuation!

JR

When life dims to a perish, my life will become a quote in itself...

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-02-22 06:22 PM

not bad...not bad at all

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

3 posted 2001-02-22 10:07 PM

Nice one Master.

~AF~

"Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment."
Buddha

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-02-23 11:37 PM

Wow.......you write bad poetry well!!
haha.
Well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.