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Heart=Life Junior Member
since 2001-02-03
Posts 29United Kingdom |
The perfect girl Is very hard to find She would have to be sweet Always on my mind I've finally found her The perfect girl The prettiest and smartest One in the world You've always been there When i've needed a mate Us two meeting I put down as fate Cos' things could be different I might not of met you Only one thing kept me going My love that was true You're a one in a million The honey for a bee The water for a plant A true love for me God sent you from above Because he heard all my cries For somebody to love who won't hurt me or lie |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
NIcely done here.....a wonderful love poem to match the v-day time period.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
"Perfect girl"...this poem must be about me.  I'm joking of course. Far from perfect here. lol Well I'm glad you've found your perfect girl. It's a very lovely poem.  and in the end we still pretend the time we spend not knowing when we're finally free and you could be -NIN "The Wretched" Angel of Darkness |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Perfection to the greatest point!!! I love this poem very much, and your emotions and words in this are very strongly put. "Lovely" work my friend Life is like a storm, it passes you by without even knowing it~Amanda |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
really sweet poem beautiful sentiments glad to see you're happy thanks for the read keep sharing So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
I think this was great... no such thing as a perfect girl, but only in your heart do they exist...nice job, i loved it Jeremy Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
No such thing as perfection... in fact, I see perfection as a type of flaw... But, regardless, I'm truly glad that you are so happy. Hold on to the feeling. xoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 02-17-2001).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This is such an emotional and heartfelt poem. Im glad that your so happy tho =o) I hope you stay like this...Show her this poem!!! Great job! |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
awww this was so good. almost made me cry I wish someone would write this for me but neways, lucky grl uve got there, keep it up*dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Nice poem Heart. Very sweet. I'm sure your perfect girl would be very happy to read this. ~AF~ "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Beautiful simply a piece that connects with what I am going through right now keep on writing |
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