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Greeneyes617
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since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

0 posted 2001-02-19 08:25 PM

Since I don't have any "new" poems I though I would psot some old ones.....

Agitation
Is like the rusty color of an old nail.
Its sounds like fingernails on a chalk board,
It taste like dry summer's dust.
It smells like scorched oatmeal.
Agitation feels like you are standing in a room full of people screaming but no one can hear you.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-02-19 10:22 PM

I completely agree.......although I've never tasted summer's dust......I really thought you displayed what agitation was nicely.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-02-19 10:55 PM

Cute. Yeah, agitation is all that...
Best of luck with your writing.
-Allan

The unintelligent are merely tools for the intelligent. That would make my house a veritable toolshed. ~~Allan Riverwood

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-02-20 07:13 PM

very descriptive indeed
i'm gonna have to agree too

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Elvenblood
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since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

4 posted 2001-02-20 07:41 PM

Oh, it's absolutely right. Captured very well.

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

5 posted 2001-02-20 07:59 PM

Great description here, my friend. Sometimes it's good to revisit past works and to share it with others. Thanks for posting!

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

6 posted 2001-02-21 05:15 PM

this is very very good. LOL i like it

Valerie

*Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes*

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