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buttercup1058
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since 2001-02-18

Posts 5

0 posted 2001-02-18 06:39 PM

Please excuse my actions,
as I quietly gaze away.
Please excuse my tears,
as I start to remember the day.
Please excuse my silence,
as I try to forget.
Please excuse my actions,
as I can't quite quit.

I can't stop remembering what we went through,
I can't stop picturing "me and you."
I can't stop hoping for another chance.
I can't stop thinkin' that maybe you'd like that.

I can't help but blame myself, for scewing things up.
I can't help but cry, because we aren't together.
I can't help but reach for you, when I wish you were there.

I can't pretend anymore, that I actually thought you were real.
I can't pretend anymore, that I didn't love you.
I can't pretend anymore, that I meant something to you.

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-02-18 06:43 PM

At first, I thought your title was referring to your third post on your first day.

This is a good piece. You have a definite style in your writing, and it suits your message well. Nice job, Meghan. Keep posting, but pace yourself a bit.
-Allan

When the sun dies, and the earth is thrown off its axis, the two of us will still, at that moment, be thinking of one another. ~~Allan, to Amanda

Elvenblood
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since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

2 posted 2001-02-18 06:50 PM

Wow, I absolutely love it! omg, that realy hits home with me, because it fits so perfectly. thanks...

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

Angel in Flight
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 381

3 posted 2001-02-18 09:42 PM

WOW this is a great poem. You put great emotion into it and I hope everything works out for the best. Love always~Amanda

The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-02-19 12:09 PM

I loved this, very nice job here. You seem to be posting quite a bit .......you should reply to others poetry too.
Anyway......keep on rollin'

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Starr
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since 2001-02-08

Posts 100

5 posted 2001-02-19 03:45 PM

Beautiful... I love it... Written well. Keep it up!!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-02-20 09:22 AM

Lovely.......simply lovely
your style is totally different than everyone elses in here, but I'll tell you what...seems like everyone is loving it
thanks for sharing

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

7 posted 2001-02-21 04:56 PM

this is absolutely wonderful!! I LOVE IT!
i too thought you were referring to your posting LOL but anyway, i love this, it fits me well

~*Valerie*~

*Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes*

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