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And we danced- -revised- - please read
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
And we danced We met and in an instant we were friends, we talked and different emotions you did send. I knew from then that we would be together someday, we're not going anywhere, we're here to stay. So thats how our story begins, together is how you and I have been. Always there no matter when or where, This much I know won't change, I swear. Over the years we have talked and had our fun, not expecting these new emotions to come. I think that we both knew something was always there, you have given it all to me, your love and your care. So we went to a dance one night, everything changed, I now see you in a different light. As we danced together, our souls connected, you and I were the lucky two that had been selected We danced till there was no more, now I feel as if we have more in store. We hugged and said goodbye, and now I realize that you are one really special guy. I can't let you go, and let you leave forever, because I know it our destiny for us to be together. So now all I can do is hope you feel the same way too, its just so perfect, me and you. hey everyone, please tell me what you think of this one, I am thinking about putting it in our school's poem, short story, etc. book. [This message has been edited by Angel Bee (edited 02-20-2001).] |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
Thanks Angel in Flight! :o) now its all better. :o) hehe [This message has been edited by Angel Bee (edited 02-18-2001).] |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Angel Bee, you can change what you wrote it is one of the little buttons on the top. The 3rd to be exact. By the way WONDERFUL poem!!! I loved all your emotions you showed within this poem. Very Extremely Well done. Love always~AManda The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this.....nice one here!!!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Very sweet poem indeed Seems like you've found a format that fits you I hope to see more poems poested by you then  thanks for sharing So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
please write what you think asap. thanks sooo much, your opion helps me a lot. :o) |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
 that was so sweet of you, it was sad but still wicked good. He must mean alot to you. Min If someone hates you, they never loved you. |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Hey, I love it, It's very good storytelling. "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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