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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
I am regretful to be the one to say a member here has now gone away. She took our guidance but in the end her life was concluded and a new initiated to begin. She went for assistance however it was to late along the way she had a horrendous fate. He father detected what she was proximal to do so one late time he abused you. He took you home, then got paid for one night of touchier and there you laid. I sauntered in your home and there you were on the bed incompliant, extinguished , and dead. I inform you all and promise this is no lie...... Mandi, I now know why thee angels cry. ps. If anyone wants more information or to talk about this please e-mail me privately at [email protected] < !signature--> To do anyting LESS then your BEST is to SACRIFICE the GIFT!!! [This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
... from what i gather this is a true story. i am so sorry. really am. if theres anything i can do, you know where to contact me. (top button things they werk) San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I'm not sure about the situation, what happened, the details, but I am interested in listening to what you have to say. Amanda, these situations are nothing to keep to oneself. I'm glad that you were willing to post an obscure poem, at the very least, to inform us of this. You know that I'm here for you at all times, to listen and to offer you my advice. This can be said for everyone else as well, I'm sure. This is what friends are for. Did you ever read the upper right section of the blue border, where it says "a family of friends?" This is exactly what we are. You are a member of our family, always will be. Never hesitate to ask anything of us. I can offer you my support for now. If you need anything more from me, please ask. I don't want you to suffer because of whatever did happen. We can help you through this, if you are willing to let us. I'm always here for you. -Allan Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Allan, Thank you very much and I believe I would like to talk to you sometime. Thank you for what you said it means a very lot to me. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was kind of disturbing. I hope everything is ok. I surely do hope so.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Angel I don't knwo what to say... this is the worst thing that can happen. I was touched deeply by your words and I hope that you can keep her memory alive... Melz!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
 All I can do is frown!! Im so sad now.... Youve done a great deed in writing that poem, im sure it came from the heart talk to me if you need to, we are all here ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Jeremy, I would LOVE to talk to just about anyone right now but there are very few people i trust and i usually try my best to keep everything inside until i cant handle it anymore. So until that time comes thank you for the offer |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
I hope no one minds...I hardly even knew her but I believe I should still post a poem I just wrote for her. She deserves to be remembered by all of us. [This message has been edited by Poet on Acid (edited 01-14-2001).] |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Poet on Acid,Alright I sent you an e-mail regarding mandi [This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-14-2001).] |
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GirlsBestFriend Member
since 2000-12-27
Posts 71Planet Earth |
nicely written. I wished u told us the story here but it's all up to u. it's great remembering our friends after death. ~lotsa luv "Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world" |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Girls best friend,The story is first of all hard to talk about and the detail i believe are to vivid to post here. [This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-14-2001).] |
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lil_princess New Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 4 |
I think this was a great way, to share how u feel rite, now and I imagine it mad u feel better to let it out, so keep it up! It was beautiful. Dana |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
all i can do now is cry i just can't imagine what you're going thru right now i hope her father is in jail i read Mandi's profile and it says she's from chiago -- is this right? cause im from the area too, and if this guy is not in jail, im gonna personally put him in one i'm so upset right now, im sorry if im saying things that sounds crazy I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Angel~ I am very sorry to hear about your friend. From the poem I just read by you and by her I dont know what to say. My heart is broken. I am very sorry that you lost your friend. Life is full of pain. But its really good that you are trying to keep her alive. It hurts when you lose someone close to you but if they are in pain then I would think its for the better. It would have been better if somehow this was prevented. But sometimes we are too blind to see or too scared to want to get help. And by trying to keep her memory alive you are being a good friend to her. I had a close friend get shot to death cause he was in a gang. Hes been gone almost 3 years now and its so hard for me to get over it. And when he died it didnt hit me quite as hard as it is now that I am believing it. I will keep you and her in my prayers. If you ever wanna talk feel free to email me. People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Erin~ Thank you for the kind words it means alot to me and has helped me to realize a few things also. Acrie~ No, sadly he is not in jail and yes she was from the chicago area, but please dont even try to do anything although it was a kind gester to say, but if you tried i would truly call you crazy. I just think sometimes people have to test out there wings and try to do things on their own. Your very sweet not the less |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I am so sad and horrified to hear this news, but I guess Jesus heard her cry one time too many and decided to take her somewhere where nobody could hurt her anymore. She will be missed. Angel or anyone else, if you ever need a friend, feel free to e-mail me at [email protected]. I don't have all the answers, but I'll always listen and do what I can. If ANYONE reading this is being abused in ANY WAY, PLEASE PLEASE get some help! This is the best way to honor Mandi's memory... don't let it happen again. Tell someone that can help you, an adult friend, a teacher, SOMEONE! Revelation 21:4-- " And God shall wipe away all tears from their eyes; and there shall be no more death, neither sorrow, nor crying, neither shall there be any more pain: for the former things are passed away." RIP Mandi < !signature--> "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav [This message has been edited by LoveBug (edited 01-15-2001).] |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Love bug~ Your making me cry =`( That was a very beautiful thing you have said. I sent you an e-mail regarding mandi. Thank you for your kind words. ~Angel in Flight~ [This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-15-2001).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wow, I'm so sorry to hear this, I believe the others have said what I would have, so ditto to them. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I'm sorry to say that I didn't recieve your e-mail, Angel. If you could send it again, I'd appreciate it. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
That is so terrible. I am so sorry for the loss. This has caught me quite off guard so I don't know what else to say. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
I’m never very good in situations like these, so I’ll communicate in the only way I know how. For Someone I Did Not Know Out of tragedy I speak, the words of misery we weep, One more star shown bright, then only to flicker and fade to black, A little girl’s dream, a life that can not be taken back, A sea of tears she swam, and in the shadow of disgust she stood, A memory of life ended so soon our hearts now keep, One more tragedy, one more cloud to circle an already obscure sky, "Maybe in another life, i could find you there, pulled away before your time, i can't deal, so i feel and feels and it feels like heaven is so far away, yeah it seems, it seems now, world has gone cold, now that you've gone away..." The Offspring, Gone Away |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
This is so sad!!! what exactly happened? I'm jsut wondering...i went thru and read her poetry...it seemed so sad...and i guess now i know why www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
I don't know what to say...My God..... |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Love bug~ as soon as i can i will try to e-mail you right now i just cant talk about her anymore. I hope you understand keoni~ Thank you for your kind words it is much appreciated. Deranger~ You say you know not how to say things well i promise you this what you said was quite well and it touched my heart deeply. Thank you very much for what you said it will be remembered always. Tamma~as i said to love bug right now i just cant talk about it maybe someday soon i will explain what has happened to her. Childofthestars~ It is ok you dont know what to say there really isnt anything anyone can. =o) |
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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
if you need anyone to talk to i'm here for you im very good at listening and understanding just email me at [email protected]  |
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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
i get abused at home dad treats me like im nothing mum threatens me i cant tell anyone im too scared one day i did and i got bashed badly |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
This is so sad. But I do know an inkling of what you may be feeling. I lost a friend of my own when I was younger and I hope that there is light for your life soon. **No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.** ~a_little_girl |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Angel, I totally understand. Sarah, if you feel that you are really being abused, PLEASE tell someone in your life that can help! A teacher, an adult friend, a police officer, someone!!! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
i did, i told a guy on chat bout it that said he was working for child protection and he rang my dad and he just made it so worse |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This is the kind of poem that makes me extremely angry. I hope that her father learns a good lesson soon. I like your last line at the end, "Mandi, I now know why thee angels cry." So true. If you need assistance, my email is: [email protected] This sounds like a very terrible tragedy indeed. |
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Neokrew Member
since 2000-12-24
Posts 60VA |
I know this is going to be like edited or deleted or someting but I just wanted to say I hope they give the son of a *~*~* the gas chamber. I would like more information so if you could email me about it Angel in flight I would greatly appreciate it. [email protected] |
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The Lost Supertone Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 74Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada |
OK I'm not sure at what point this was posted... but I just wanna say that I will pray for you. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oh my god..for once i am lost for words. I am so sorry to hear about this. Sorry I didn't see this sooner or else I would have posted. Karma will get her father. He cannot outrun his destiny forever. His time will come. If you need to talk to me about ANYTHING feel free to email me. [email protected] ~AF~ "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Uck.... I'm really sorry, even though this is late. And Sarah, this is what you do. Find a time when you will not appear suspiscious, like when going to a friend's house, or before/after school. Then you go to the police station. Get an adult to take you. You need to stop this, and it will only stop if you make more than a half-hearted atempt. I know you're scared, and your parents are probably awful, but you need to seek an adult who can help you. I'm sorry to say I didn't read any of Mandi's work before she died, and I don't want you in the same boat as her. Her memory stands to help you and others out, don't let her down. xoxo Jenn< !signature--> "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 01-23-2001).] |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
(speachless) Mandi's poem has been in my head since the day I read it. This world just isn't right some times. She will be missed and forever remembered. ~Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
I would just like to thank everyone for their kind words and sympathy twords me it was and still is very much appreciated. Thank you all |
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