Teen Poetry #4 |
To Grow Strong(Regina,This one's for you!!) |
Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Look at me I shout in the sky!!! Put me down and I’ll promise I’ll fly! Laugh at me and I’ll smile at you. Hurt me and I’ll grow strong because of what you do. Tease me and I’ll laugh because you don’t see. that you will never be as spiritually strong as me! When YOU fall down I’ll lift YOU up high! You can't do it yourself and I’ll tell you why; For all the times you hurt me so, put me down,and laughed I took another blow. And for every time you have teased, I grew stronger and my troubles went at easy. Now you no one has made you cry. Make you feel like you wish to die. Now me ,myself, I’ve felt that way... and I tell you now................................................ thank you for all of those mean things you say!! (I love you Regina even though I dont know you that well just wanted you to know that I truly Do) < !signature--> look forward,But forget not the past for it has brought you this far~by Allan and Amanda [This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-20-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice tribute to regina. I'm sure she'll appreciate it greatly. If she doesn't, we can all throw coconuts at her. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
well since i don't know who regina is i am just going to say that it was a great poem. "It's better to burn out then fade away" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great job of saying this in a poem!!! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
A lot is being said in this piece, Amanda. I think that we could all learn something by reading this. As for Regina, I certainly do hope that she does read this and gets something out of it. We all need to emerge stronger. -Allan |
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The Lost Supertone Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 74Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada |
(The Lost Supertone readys his coconut) yeah that was a nice poem. I personaly have had a lot of people be real jerks to me. So now when more of them come, before I would have probably just crawled into the featal position and rocked back and forth, but since I have gone through the other people I can jus think... man these guys are just plain redundant. I mean eventually your dulled by it... while I dont' think that anyone should ever have a reason to become dulled to pain like that. I do realize that it happens, and it can be a gift in disguse, although I would NEVER thank the people that have hurt me. But I do think this is a good poem. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Javier!!!if u throw one coconut at me you r going to regret it....u will never win!!!lol *bow* o yeah i won amanda thank you for the poem so much it was beautiful, ALlan told me about it amaizng, thank u im in tears Regina [This message has been edited by Ina (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i see that you've just made someone feel special and that's good you do have a beautiful heart Amanda keep posting I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
lol @ dopey Allan~ You are very true to what you have said, and hopefully everyone will learn "to grow strong" and maybe this time from the heart. Regina~ I am hapoy to have made you feel just a little better. Grow strong my friend and fight from the heart. Acrie~ Thank you for the smile |
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