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Truth About Love |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
The truth about love, can hurt a lot. Believe me, I know, the pain doesn't always show. The truth about love, can be decieving. Believe me, I know, the betrayal doesn't always show. The truth about love, can be warm. Believe me, I know, the warmth does always show. The truth about love, is that in the end, you'll always be comforted, by a friend. **No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.** ~a_little_girl |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
ooh nice message think Ill add this to the library for advice someday ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
this was a very good, well written poem with a nice message. but i want to know, how many of you have actually tried to have a friend as a partner? ive seen too many cases where people get heartbroken by the nkob (new kid on the block, haha i cant beleave i actually remember this stuff) and leave those people whove you know deeply only to wonder "why the hell did he/she go with the new girl/guy if *include person s/he knows and that likes him/her* is here and s/he knows he/she would never do that to him/her?" San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a nice one........I think the only truth about love is that you can't describe it with words. Plus with the fact that Love can never be bad.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Jeremy--thanks San--I meant a friend to comfort you, to offer advice. DEFINITELY NOT to be a boyfriend/girlfriend. Dopey--what you said was true.< !signature--> **No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.** ~a_little_girl [This message has been edited by a_little_girl (edited 01-14-2001).] |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great Job here a_little_girl... this is soo true!! Morouxshi San... I gotta agree with you... soo many times we look further than we need to to find love. But by the time we realise it it's too late... been there done that!! Oh and Dopey I kinda disagree... Love is a wonderful thing, but once it hurts, it hurts a lot... It isn't all "Beer and Skittles" as my dad says!! Melz!! < !signature--> You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... [This message has been edited by Melster (edited 01-14-2001).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Your words are so true...yet its a harsh reality. Great job on the poem hun  Keep it up! |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
that was awesome, great ending. Keep it up! >¶Øʆ< |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hmm... well done, it really makes you think about who you love. -Allan |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Mel--Your dad's right it ain't what we want it to be Everyone else--thank you **No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.** ~a_little_girl |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I don't know bout love.... but liking someone who doesn't like you back hurts like heck... so love must really suck.  Anyway, good poem! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really like what you said in this poem, nice job! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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