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Dear Daddy
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Dear Daddy |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
Dear daddy today I went to the hospital cause I wasn't feeling to good my legs were bugging me Daddy when the EMT'S came I thought of you when you went to the hospital were you scared as scared as I was Daddy what were you doing in my dream watching me to make sure I was doing okay Daddy when they came to the house I screamed Lucy was unhappy she was sad cause I was leaving Daddy when I got to the hospital I was tired and in pain the doctor came in said we'll give you some medds Daddy soon the nurse gave me somes meds I fell asleep and they took my blood let me sleep and let me rest Daddy then Miia and mom called mom didn't like how I was in the hospital I said mom I was in pain Daddy she doesn't understand me I was in pain crying so I called 911 Daddy when I fell asleep you came into my dream you were worried about me Daddy when I woke up again the pain came back I screamed the nurse gave me some meds I said thank you I feel asleep again Daddy soon mom and Suvi came mom said you are never staying home alone she said you could of called your aunts Daddy I didn't know their number so I called 911 got some help they helped me Daddy soon mom took me home I was so happy got to go home Daddy that night that you went into the hospital that memorie stays with me always your always with me Love Always, your angel Minna ~You never lose a friend, unless you make you lose a friend~ |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Minna, Please PLEASE never ever do that to me again please. I almost killed myself literally. I thought you were going to die and I havent stopped thinking about you. Hoping and praying that you are ok and everything will be fine. Please promise me you will never do that to me again please. I will not be able to handle it. I am very very happy you are ok but please dont do that again please i beg of you. |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
I promise I won't, but after that I had spasms when my legs start to shake. I was in so much pain. |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
That is why you dont overdose on your medication and if you wouldnt have then your legs might have not done that. I know how it feel to have spasms in your legs i do believe me, but you cant scare me like that again. You have no idea what i had gone through. i made at least 5 long distance phone calls to see if you were alright. Plesae be more careful next time i dont want anything to happen to you or anyone here at passions. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
i liked the poem a lot... seems like theres more to the story but Im not gonna get into that. keep writing ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice one here....just a friendly bump.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
nice to see you in passions again Minna Take Angel's advice no more overdosing on medications, ok? I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hey Minna I liked this poem a lot. It's good that such an incident can inspire you this much. Nice to know you are feeling better now. -Allan |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great job of telling this Minna, glad to hear you're back home  < !signature-->"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 01-18-2001).] |
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