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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
I look upon memorys that will last, Upon the good that make you smile and laugh, Even the one that make you sad, With tears in my eyes from memorys gone bad, I look back with a fruitful heart, Wondering when I was torn apart, Painful things made to be, But all of these set me free, Some make you hurt, some make you cry, some make you sick, some make you lie, With all these bottled into one, I leap foward looking for some fun, With every day that departs, I save a place in my heart, Several things made to be, But in all of them I am still me. Lead me not into temptation, I can find the way there mysel |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
nice... a good collection of memories stated here, nice job Jeremy Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark. |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Very nice job. A good insight on memories. All memories are meant to be cherished. Even the bad ones where you can look back on them and learn from the mistakes. Thanks for the good read. *Jennifer "My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see." |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
This is pretty good. Nice poem. |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
hey I do my best Lead me not into temptation, I can find the way there mysel |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very interesting really good one thanks for the wonderful read keep sharing So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
i love this! It spells out the truth in every way. some memories will make you sick but you gotta take the bad with the good. the bad just make the good memories that much better!!  great job. it's goin in my library *VALERIE* *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
thanks sugarpie I am glad to know that my poem made it into your libary Lead me not into temptation, I can find the way there mysel |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done jytree......I liked this one aswell!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
thanks dopey Lead me not into temptation, I can find the way there mysel |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Oh my Gosh this is soo beautiful. I extremely loved the last two lines "Several things made to be, But in all of them I am still me." This is going into my library. I am so happy I was able to read it and that you shared it with us all. The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Heh, I love it! Memories aren't meant to be remembered, but felt, and you can feel them in this poem. "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
I am glad the you understood what some memories can do when you just sit ant hink apon them Lead me not into temptation, I can find the way there mysel |
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