Teen Poetry #4 |
A Broken Heart Because Of Broken Promises |
Wheelsgirl Junior Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 21MA, USA |
A Broken Heart Because Of Broken Promises Why do people make promises they can’t keep? Is their a reason why I’m so gullible?... What makes me this way? Do I always have to set myself up for disappointment?... Why do I do it? People say to me, “Oh yeah I can do this for you” or “Oh yeah I can do that for you” and it never happens... That makes me so mad! When are people going to learn not to make promises that they can’t keep?... Maybe never!!!!!!!! Why does their have to be people in this world that would do such an awful thing?... Like break someone’s heart!!!!! |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Well I like it!! lol I don't know about anyone else, but I think it has great emotion in it. And I hope it doesn't happen to you (again maybe). "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
HEY! This was pretty good and I can't really answer why people break hearts.....but hey.....it's life i guess. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Not too bad... the format could improve. But the emotion and feeling was there for sure. Your question is actually the one question I keep asking myself... lemme know when you find the answer. "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Unfortunately, I don't have the answer to your questions? You have shown such emotions on this piece. I'm sorry you feel this way right now. hope things get better. So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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