Teen Poetry #4 |
needs a little work i know... |
steve New Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 9Canada |
-=Popular=- You wonder why, Your loved so dear, By all which be, That know your here. You stand up strong, Amongst the crowd, Hold your head, Above us all. *** A far I am, Watch I do, Never near, For fear of you. I learnt you love, I learnt you care, Although it be, Not widely shared. *** Now it's hard to say, Explain my cries, It seems though so sad, Peering in your eyes. I wonder why, Why i do. What reason i have, To love you. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very good poem. I liked this one. Keep posting. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!! this is really really good. hehehe it has left me speechless ~Valerie~ *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
hey great poem..and good material subject.. "It's better to burn out then fade away" |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow this is really great....it reminds me of a few songs. Wow....dang...this is great.... good luck Bel |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
I really like this one...I understand your situation and I hope everything works out okay... |
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The Lost Supertone Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 74Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada |
WOW A LOVE POEM THAT I LIKED!!!! Sorry but most of them anoy the heck out of me, I realized it was one half way through and by that point I liked it! Man we need to have a party, I'll go get some steamers, who wants to pick up the cake? |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was such an amazing poem...you are such a talented writer. Great poem and keep them comin! |
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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
i really like this poem i went through something like this last year well keep posting somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Now that was really good!!! "I learnt you love, I learnt you care, Although it be, Not widely shared." amazing...simply amazing keep em coming I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Nada Surf anyone??? Too bad they were one hit wonders, that was a cool song!! Anyway, Great poem.... keep 'em coming. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this poem it great! i love it. |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
I also loved it!! It's wonderful! I really cna't htink of anything to say! but it's great! "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I read this again and just thought i should bump up. It's such a good poem. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
oh I am speechless......This is such a strong meaningful poem I can hardly reply. Amazing just totally and absolutly astonishing poem. Wonderful work The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny |
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