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Silent Tears |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Silent tears fall Down her face In steady streams Of eternal grace One by one They all fall down Gathering in a pool In the crook of a frown She wipes them away Yet still more appear All her feelings are trapped Within a single tear Standing alone She faces her fears Yet she's still crying Her silent tears Feb. 09, 2001 ~*~SCG~*~ |
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angelberry New Member
since 2001-02-16
Posts 2 |
that's cute but sad poem. and you don't tell what she's crying about, you just mention fears...which can be anything, so anyone could connect with this poem, i like it. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
rolled on quite nicely, i enjoyed it very much Jeremy Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
this is really sad i hope you're doing better if it helps --- keep sharing be strong So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
this one was very good. i hope that this is not you but if it is, sharing always helps! keep writing, your very talented. i like the flow, makes it easy to read. ~VALERIE~ *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
That's amazing. I absolutely LOVE IT! Like Val said, I hope it's not you, but if it is: such talent can either be hampered or propelled by such pain, work it into a wire, and pull happiness to you. "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very very good poem. I felt the pain within this poem. You write very well, but once again, I hope everything is ok.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
With ever tear morun now less, Istead place you head upon my chest, Let me wisper in your ears, And by doing this we saw shatter all fears. Hey I miss you alot and will be glad to see you again WHEN it happens. Lead me not into temptation, I can find the way there mysel |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Jay, you are so sweet!  Thanks all for the replies..Once again, this poem is not about me...But thanks for the concern! I'm not sure if Chic had told ya'll yet, but Rick and I are expecting a little bundle of joy ourselves! If ya'll want to, ya'll can write a poem for it! I plan on putting all the donations in a scrapbook! Isn't that a cool idea? Talk to ya'll later! ~*~SCG~*~ |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
*bump* ~*~SCG~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Good job on the poem scg, bumping doesn't quite work the same now that there is new software. it no longer moves the poem up when the author replies to it, it only changes the color of the folder to a grey and puts it on the "todays topics" page. Please visit my webpage: http://lakewalker.homestead.com/index.html |
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