Teen Poetry #4 |
Last Kiss |
Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I can't gp on like that anymore, i can't keep living like this. I need to find who I am soon, I need just one last kiss. One last kiss to tell me, if there's anything there, if we're meant to be, or if you even care. one last kiss to say, all that's been unsaid, and to clear all the thoughts, right out of my head. One last kiss. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Allysa what's going on now? hope things are better sad but beautiful poem thanks for the read keep sharing So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Yeah, I hope everything is okay. You sound like you are expressing desperation in this poem. Here's a nice kiss from me. **KISS** Hope it helps. ^_^ Good poem. -Allan When the sun dies, and the earth is thrown off its axis, the two of us will still, at that moment, be thinking of one another. ~~Allan, to Amanda |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good luck allysa........hopefully things fly yer way. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
Alyssa, Sad but wonderful poem...Hope things are going alot better...hope to read more things from you soon. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I'm having an interesting life. If Justin would just answer his gosh g danged phone, I'd have a lot better time. Thanks Allan, it helps. I'll keep you posted when i figured out what's up. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was great poem...i've felt like this in the past. Great job |
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