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Ski*Chick
Member

since 2001-01-13

Posts 141
Fitchburg, Mass, Usa

0 posted 2001-02-23 05:58 PM

You don't know how much you mean to me
but I'll never forget the day you asked me out
I almost cried I could of died, you said "hello?"
I said yes.

We went on our first date
I just looked into your eyes
they were bright blue
you put your arm around me.

I called you and said "Eric I miss you"
you said Minna I miss you too
you changed my life
I changed your life.

I don't understand why you drink
that scares me
you tell me it's only one
I cry.

You come to my house after your drunk
I'm mad at you, you try hugging me I push you away
you send me a email
it makes me want to cry.

I love you Eric

Love always

Minna

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-02-23 11:24 PM

nice peening of thoughts here Minna
hope he sees that you don't want him drinking

thanks for sharing

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-02-25 12:20 PM

Nicely done minna.
Your style of writing is interesting. I like it though, it's quite different.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

3 posted 2001-02-25 08:28 AM

A good display of emotions here Minna. It's a good piece.

~AF~

"Love makes us poets and the approach of death should make us philosophers."
~ George Santayana

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-02-25 03:03 PM

I can relate to knowing someone with an alcohol problem. It truly is a disgusting habit, and creates bad people out of good ones.
Should you ever have to talk to someone who understands, my ICQ # is right up there, on the blue flower.
Great poem. I like what you did with the last lines in each stanza.
-Allan

The unintelligent are merely tools for the intelligent. That would make my house a veritable toolshed. ~~Allan Riverwood

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