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Kids : Dont try this at home |
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LucidityNow Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 118Canada |
Note : Dont ask me where I came up with this one, I was just thinking how I always wanted to see this actually done. I am laughing as I write it.  one... fifty... six hundred... one thousand... ten thousand... sixty thousand... sixty thousand and one... SNAP! The straw that broke the camels back and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me... [This message has been edited by LucidityNow (edited 02-16-2001).] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
interesting  So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
all those straws? hehehe........I didn't get it at first but now i do....i like it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
lol Always nice to see some humor.  and in the end we still pretend the time we spend not knowing when we're finally free and you could be -NIN "The Wretched" Angel of Darkness |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, Good job on this one! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Interesting... I found this amusing as well. I don't really have too much to critique you on here. All around this was a pretty funny and well arranged poem. |
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