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Should I tell you?
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Should I tell you? |
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shortilove_03 Junior Member
since 2001-02-15
Posts 20Arkansas, United States |
Should I tell you? Dare I tell you? How you make me feel? My heart flutters at your mere touch and fills with such love that I cannot put it into words Without you I am nothing with you I am everything. If there is a mountain to climb With you I can climb it. If there is an ocean to be crossed With you I can cross it. You do so much to me I don't know where to begin. My burning desire for you can be matched by no other. Your voice makes me shiver. Your touch makes me burn. though the rhapsody I should find in your kiss still eludes me. I have yet to touch your warm mouth. And I long for it fiercely. Don't leave me. I need you. I have poured out to you the contents of my heart and need a response. but don't rush. Tell me in your own sweet time. But, I need you to love me Because I love you. And even if you don't, just hold me and whisper in my ear all the sweetness of the world. And i hope that in time my love, You will love me as I love you. Kinda long, I know. Hope ya like it. =-) Shelia aka shortilove |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS it's good to see that you've decided to join our family of poets here in Passions for Poetry. I hope you would feel at home and enjoy your stay. Happy sharing and reading ps. check you email So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Andrea4writes Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 31Fayetteville, NC USA |
WELCOME Very good poem for a first post i cant wait to read more of your writings please keep it up it is very cool ... i loved ... that is how my baby makes me feel... once again welcome and very good <3Andrea ~luvs~ Anthony,<3 You only live once so live it to the fullest.. Love comes and goes but friends stay for ever~!~!~!~!~! |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Welcome to Passions! Wonderful first post. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to passions! Nicely done here on this one! Hope to see you around more.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Is it just me, or have we lately been hit with a deluge of newbies? No complaints here. Shelia, you wrote an excellent poem, in this piece. The way you express the feeling... really got to me. "Don't leave me. I need you. I have poured out to you the contents of my heart and need a response. but don't rush." This part really got me... you show such urgency, but you let your head tell you that it should not be rushed. Indeed, love is a war between the brain and the heart. Welcome to Passions. It is always nice to see a new addition to our family of poets. -Allan When the sun dies, and the earth is thrown off its axis, the two of us will still, at that moment, be thinking of one another. ~~Allan, to Amanda |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
umm what Allan  But no really, great poem..it was a good read. keep it up*dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions I love the first line of this "Should I tell you? Dare I tell you?" Nice job on this poem, I hope you post some more for us and stick around for a while "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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