Jeremy's Haiku Challenge- "Growing"

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Teen Poetry #4

LoveBug

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0 posted 2001-02-14 05:15 PM

Growing towards the sky
Climbing, in spite of it all
Never giving up

This is probably the worst one that will be posted. I was never good at Haikus!

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

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On the streets w/ people

1 posted 2001-02-14 05:18 PM

I think it fits the picture very well, great job

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Acies

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since 2000-06-07

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Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-02-14 05:45 PM

you did well Erica

How's that story going?

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

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since 2000-08-30

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San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-02-14 09:22 PM

I thought this was ok.
nice try

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

4 posted 2001-02-14 10:11 PM

i liked it a lot! thanks for your participation

Jeremy

Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark.

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