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Tears of Glass
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 182
Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure

0 posted 2001-02-12 03:40 PM

Imagine a sea
Torn asunder by worry
Ripped apart by hate
Unsettled by injustice

Imagine a country
Torn asunder by worry
Ripped part by hate
Colored red by fury

Now imagine a person
Torn asunder by worry
Ripped apart by hate
Saved with your love

Imagine a world
Of peace and beauty
And undeniable love
Ruined from ignorance

Imagine a Father
Filled with love
Broken hearted by
Our feelings of hate

Work towards the sunset
Never dread the sunrise
Each step is unique
But never doubt each direction

Find the light in darkness
Pray to a God others don’t know
Believe in Angels
Hear their voices

Love the rain
Dance in the moonlight
Watch the ocean’s tide flow in
Sing for Joy

Cry for the lost
Weep for the empty
Love the different
Accept the beauty in everything

Stop hating
Quit smoking
Drop the glass of alcohol
Stop in mid-punch

But don’t turn away
Don’t move a boulder
In someone else’s path
And never stop imagining.

"My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see."

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-02-12 06:34 PM

i agree with all your dos and don'ts in the end
we need more of these kind of poems in the forum
thanks for sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-02-12 06:52 PM

Hey I liked this one.....very good job.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

3 posted 2001-02-13 10:17 AM

this was so different than most poems in this forum...i agree with everything your saying and I loved the part about not to push a boulder in someone elses way, bravo!

Jeremy

"Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark." - Jeremy Raulinaitis---'Fading Me Away'

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

4 posted 2001-02-14 11:48 PM

sorry i missed this, it was excellent. especially

"Cry for the lost
Weep for the empty
Love the different
Accept the beauty in everything"

that was my fav part

Keep posting, this was beautiful

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

Greeneyes617
Member

since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

5 posted 2001-02-15 12:30 PM

THAT WAS SOOO AWESOME! Wow, I am amazed by this. You are so talented. Thanks for posting it.

Neokrew
Member

since 2000-12-24

Posts 60
VA

6 posted 2001-02-15 01:49 PM

Hey Jenn,

I loved you poem and guess what I LOVE YOU {

(kinda looks like my hair hehehe

--Neo

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