»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #4
»
Lost Jewels
| Teen Poetry #4 |
|
Lost Jewels |
|
|
Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
One more endless day During the slow weeks When thick coats of contradiction pour over me so quickly And for my sadistic tongue, to satisfy my addiction I swallow it all 'til it chokes me and I am poisoned and drunk off of bottled up secrets I want to let it out but I can't for reasons that can never be known to you ....or me My soul a lonely vessel Where is home? I've walked this road too many times before "Home is where your heart is," he said to me when I asked him But that doesn't help me because I don't know where it is... ....my heart I am no one if not myself. Angel of Darkness |
||
| © Copyright 2001 Morgana - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
Wow. I loved that. I'm sorry you feel that way though, I can't say I really know what your going through but it doesn't seem like it's totally alien to me. I hope things get better for you, keep posting. >¶Øʆ< |
||
|
Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thanks a lot! I'm feeling better now so it's no big deal. Life's peachy.  I am no one if not myself. Angel of Darkness |
||
Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
the last lines of the poem are simply amazing. I hope you do find you heart thanks for the read keep sharing |
||
|
Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
This poem is awesome.. I love your writing! Keep it up.. I liked this one. Very beautiful. *Jennifer |
||
|
Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
very nicely done here *kiss* hehe.......that was for you!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
||
|
Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Awww...  You certainly know how to brighten up a girls' day. Thanks  I am no one if not myself. Angel of Darkness [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 02-12-2001).] |
||
|
Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like this poem because it had my full attention. It caught it at the beginning and kept it to the end. Nice job on it  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
